The Watcher Comments

Whatever name you use, it's all the same... a beautiful write Best CJ

I like your poem, I read over it a few times discovering new things each time. It illustrates the 'fog' that you enter during certain stages of life. I like how you portray the Watcher. While it can be seen as a deity, you can also impersonalize it as your goals or values that guide you through your life.

I enjoyed your poem.For the most part it is an easy read with good flow.