Tuesday, November 22, 2016

The Way See Dresses Comments

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She looks really classy in her shirt,
And she really impresses in her dresses,
She has great ideals wearing her high-heels
And she is always glamours in her skirt.
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Randy McClave
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Kim Barney 22 November 2016

I like the unusual rhyme pattern you have presented here. In both verses, line one rhymes with line four. In lines two and three, you have internal rhymes: impresses, dresses ideals, high heels doom, perfume clothes, hose Very clever and impressive!

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Randy Mcclave 22 November 2016

Thank you for reading my poem, and thank you for your comment. I sometimes like to experiment when I am writing my poems. Randy

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