The Weak Rize Poem by gabby chamberland

The Weak Rize

Rating: 5.0


Distract me from these thoughts
that plague my mind
Give me something
to push my memories aside

No longer do i wish to life safely inside

Breath fresh air
in to these barren lungs

Let me stand
I want to show them
the weak have won
That the strong
will soon come undone

So i shall rise
And address all i despise

Their demise
cripples a tyrannical whole
Leading to a request
to redeem their souls

Feeble appeal denied
It is their turn to run an hide

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
MuSiC HeaD 15 August 2009

i really like this, its kinda got a revenge taste to it..... i really like this part... 'feeble appeal denied, it is their turn to run n hide' .... i love it... good job

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