Wednesday, April 1, 2009

Broken Love

Rating: 4.0
Behind closed eyes
I wish to see
Why you despise
So much of me

I try and surmise
Is this how it’s meant to be?
Your eyes drown mine
not so sentimentally

how could this be?
gabby chamberland
Jacky Dorantes 15 August 2009
'your eyes drown mines...not sentimentally'. I love these two lines. good job!
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Suicidal Magic 31 May 2009
really good! ! i like your work also and thank you XD
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Irene Clark-hogg 10 May 2009
The gentle flow and rhyming in this poem is a delight. Well done. Irene
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Cailey Horn 13 April 2009
i really love this poem! please keep writing :)
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Cindy Kreiner Sera 13 April 2009
Well written - good does one know what the other thinks...will watch your work.
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OuSs@Ma Samouna 12 April 2009
this is a nice poem, i like it alot true feelings man! ! ! keep up the good work.
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Sunset moonshine 06 April 2009
I like this.. the great thing bout love is that there is always more people out there for you... always keep your head held high! ! ! ! Love this piece... *(*_*) *
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MuSiC HeaD 01 April 2009
i really liked this one... good work =)
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