Behind closed eyes
I wish to see
Why you despise
So much of me
I try and surmise
Is this how it’s meant to be?
Your eyes drown mine
not so sentimentally
how could this be?
I like this.. the great thing bout love is that there is always more people out there for you... always keep your head held high! ! ! ! Love this piece... *(*_*) *
this is a nice poem, i like it alot true feelings man! ! ! keep up the good work.
'your eyes drown mines...not sentimentally'. I love these two lines. good job!
The gentle flow and rhyming in this poem is a delight. Well done. Irene
Well written - good question...how does one know what the other thinks...will watch your work.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i really liked this one... good work =)