Saturday, June 11, 2011

The West Wind Comments

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While the West wind blows so warm
In the dark before the dawn
Song birds sleep with heads beneath
Their wings.
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David Smart
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Jazib Kamalvi 28 April 2017

A wonderful image of an imageless thing. Thanks

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Patti Masterman 11 June 2011

This is splendid. I don't remember what you call this unusual style of rhyming or alliteration- but I always enjoy it.

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