The Whistler's Song Poem by Michael Chandler

The Whistler's Song

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Depression was only a side affect of the madness
an hour's hand that rocked back and forth carouseled your mind and every night her legs answered each question

the whistler's song that put you to sleep was high and out of tune
the dirt from under your lip kept you numb; turned you into a fool
before the reckoning that never arrived

I'd say! a deep dive taste like a gun shot!
The old man pointed and you answered the call of all lost men
A common tale that will never be forgiven, never be forgotten

Tuesday, October 16, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness,lonely,lost,lost love,madness,navy,sad,sailor
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 09 November 2018

he whistler's song that put you to sleep was high and out of tune...how loneliness can kill a person, depression, mad tendencies, experiences that is very different but typical. thank u very much for writing on this theme dear poet. thank u. tony

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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 08 November 2018

So nice poem......good thought........

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Chinedu Dike 17 October 2018

Well thought out and nicely crafted with artistic brilliance. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Michael.

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