Thursday, October 29, 2009

The Wish Granter Comments

Rating: 5.0

a foreign man comes weak and empty form his home, scared and exhausted, he collapse's in what appears to be an oasis to him, he awakes within a mansion with a strange plump old man.
'are you okay young man'
' i feel.... better'
the old man laughs
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jaques leblanc
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Jazz Annis 03 November 2009

i can't believe u! ! i knew u were a great writer but man! ! i can't believe what u wrote! ! it's amazin it's like one of the best (in my opinion) becuz it's the only thing that i really read that u wrote! ! that was a really good story and it kept me reading...i loved it! ! i do not wish to write like u but to improve my writings to a degree where ppl will think just as much of my writings as they think of yours...'amazing...' ur truly one of a kind...

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Carol Gall 29 October 2009

agreat story kept me reading 10

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Ying Escalona 29 October 2009

nice story Jaq.....i am so thrilled...

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