The Wooden Ventriloquist Clock Poem by nathan martin

The Wooden Ventriloquist Clock

Rating: 5.0


wood and strings turn the clock's
involuntary response.
hands set in motion with
the turn of a wrist,
half past remembering
the moment before.

odd numbered time signatures
pull a wooden head and hands to fold
like some pocketwatch prophet.
who shudders for a moment,
then grows still waiting for the hour
or celestrial string to slacken
and realease him.

he is not his own but anothers.

course the hands that follow
the grain of his expression,
waiting for fingers to grasp and
guide him through his seasonal acts.

umbilical chorded gears ratchet
in him to open wooden lips.
the blackened ivory teeth play in minor.

severe and break.
how he hangs there
so still and without a sound.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mason Maestro 19 January 2010

Mr. Martin Thanks for your comment on my latest writing. Appreciated, since most people don't make much an effort to do that these days... so i thought i'd return the favor. This one was quite interesting how you blend the workings of this clock with realism. It's unconventional, this concept. great choice of words.

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April Kiessling 07 July 2009

Excellent imagery-'severe and break.how he hangs'-'wooden lips. the blackened ivory teeth' and 'some pocketwatch prophet'. You really can't get any better.

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