The World Sees No Evil, Hears No Evil, But Speaks Much Evil Comments

I love the viewpoint of this how we only live to die. That is being completely realistic and is looking upon the truth. Great idea....I will have to read more of your poetry. To make the poem more alluring and popular I would change the name to something catchy and drastic. To make it more memorable I would make it a little longer and a little more horrifying to the reader. Make the reader learn to hate the world, or to want to change it. Contrast the goodness of something else to the evil world. I only say this because I know that humans look for hope and can identify with evil. If you changed this poem a little bit it would be unstable.