Wednesday, March 16, 2011

The World Today Comments

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Look at the world today and tell me what you see
Lies, pain, suffering
Horrid crimes, hate, sorrow, grief
Look and tell me if this is right
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Colin Burger
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Denis Enock 15 June 2022

Hello Collin request your aproval to record this as an audio am a recording artist pleas kindly accept ma request

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Isam Hussain 16 March 2011

the sentiment is good, but the verse lines do not read like a poem.

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