Navyata goel

Rookie - 38 Points (27th of june / Dehradun)

The Worth Of Life Is With You - Poem by Navyata goel

The worth of life is with u,
the worth with u is new,
now i feel the warmth of hue,
now d life is just with u

I spend my day n night just lyk a fyt
that u might cme in my mind,
just lyk a flight of a kite,
u might at my height

U r the one for whom i cn die,
u r the one for whom i live,
on the stage of this life,
u r my judge n audience

Finally i want to say, that..
the life is just with u,
u r my heart n soul,
which cannot hav a hole.

Topic(s) of this poem: romantic


Comments about The Worth Of Life Is With You by Navyata goel

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (1/2/2016 1:35:00 PM)


    U r the one for whom i cn die,
    u r the one for whom i live,
    on the stage of this life,
    u r my judge n audience.. A great declaration of love. a poem full of passion and desire. thank you vry much dear poetess. now is the moment. thank you. tony
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    Navyata Goel (1/8/2016 11:38:00 AM)

    thank u so very much

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  • Souren Mondal (12/5/2015 4:50:00 AM)


    Someone read this poem before me and rated it '3' points and left without a comment which is slightly unfair... Navyata, all I can tell you is that you may kindly try to write your poems in 'proper' English, as in spell them differently than in SMS lingo... I have seen, frankly, worse poems in this site, but at least those poets took the pains of spelling properly...

    Thanks for sharing, but please spell the words right.
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    Navyata Goel (1/2/2016 1:09:00 PM)

    dont go on lenght of words...go in the depth of words

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 4, 2015



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