The Wreck Of The Night Poem by ame titus

The Wreck Of The Night

Rating: 4.5


My ailment deepens to roots,
Slackened by the uproar of distress
I sheltered a fat bubbly balloon of thoughts.
Then I busted out and shed flowers
Red, red flowers
Pain eats me with its jaws so hard
Sky with its grin shined
At loss I churned out the scum of myself,
Mind's best pricks
Shrill aches in each throb
Hurts, everything
Your dust I trample in every thought
Your smell I sweep
This room shrinks so quickly
Breaks me
Like a black hole
I must go.

Saturday, March 26, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: flowers,loss,red
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
loss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 13 April 2016

An insightful depiction of distress well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Titus.

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