Theory Of Rejection. Poem by Safiyyah Manjra

Theory Of Rejection.



Knowing you can overcome your difficulties,
Is one of the most treasured beliefs.

I don't think one can truly grow,
Unless they have experienced hardship to and fro.

Has been thrown around,
In this pit call life which hits harder than the solid ground.

Never had rejection,
Come with a better instruction.

Progress far beyond your initial eye.
Let your success become your permanent dye.

For I would've loved to be where you are.
To experience a reality which is a dream afar.

I hope I'll be a surprise,
For those who have taken in my benevolent cry.
As they will see I am a gift you just don't let pass by.

Monday, April 16, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: fun,happy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Murray Smith 18 April 2018

This is a better offering. Well done.

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Safiyyah Manjra 21 April 2018

Thank you Sir. I noticed a few grammatical errors. still do, but yea. I wrote this very late. Thanks for the feedback

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Robert Murray Smith 16 April 2018

Unfortunately, you poem does not flow freely.

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Safiyyah Manjra 17 April 2018

Hey Mr Smith i have made changes. please view.

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