Fail With Repeat. Poem by Safiyyah Manjra

Fail With Repeat.

Rating: 4.1


The pain of the heart.
After trying something which once kept you together.
Is now tearing you apart.

The biggest failure is the one I see in myself.
Hiding and fearing a repeat.
Shall I display my grades on a shelf?

Trying effortlessly.
Getting somewhere.
Yet feeling like nowhere surprisingly.

If every student felt the call to success ringinging,
Then wouldn't each call?
Be answered instead of suppressing?

I have support to continue.
Though he may only be one,
I am thankful he is none of few.

I will try again.
Like I always do.
Refrain from the pain

A lecturer's bias disdain,
Definitely without doubt,
Can only hold so much claim.

Monday, January 6, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: agony,disappointment,hurt,student,study,worry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 13 February 2020

The pain of the heart! ! ! ! Facing the odds of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Safiyyah Manjra 17 February 2020

You are most welcomed... i always think sharing personal stories can be understood by others. Glad to share my insight.

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Mahtab Bangalee 13 February 2020

biased brain leads wrongly biased teacher teaches unwisely come come to the kingdom of independent learning yes come to the nature and learn wisely silently

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Safiyyah Manjra 17 February 2020

independent learning is key. This is something which i have adapt to. Thank you Sir.

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 February 2020

I will try again. Like I always do. Refrain from the pain.. a very good decision especially in the midst of disappointment and the resulting mental pain. tony

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Safiyyah Manjra 17 February 2020

Thank you Sir. I will try again!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 13 February 2020

A well composed poem of the day. Congrats on your featured piece, dear Ma’am Safiyyah...10+++❤️

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Safiyyah Manjra 17 February 2020

Thank you Sir Asuncion for reading my poems ever so often. Thank you for being so dedicated. < 3

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