the wind that blows coming from north,
it fills us with strength.
all the clouds of the past left without a noise.
the sun is getting old.
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A wonderful and meaningful poem embellished with metaphors and compelling images. Great thoughts to ponder about.
A well composed piece with a very prolific cadence! And a very interesting subject well conveyed in grand imagery! A great write--thank you for sharing it!
This is such a good poem- it's good for interpreting, too- anyone who read it could take 'us' and place their own person within. Makes for an awesome poem, and amazing use of figurative language! [333