Though a comment about your poetry won't do much to ease the hurt, I think your poem very effectively expresses your strong feelings. I really like the last stanza in which you want your identity back, the 'me without you' back. We've all felt it, this heartbreak, and putting it into words does seem to help sometimes.
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Though a comment about your poetry won't do much to ease the hurt, I think your poem very effectively expresses your strong feelings. I really like the last stanza in which you want your identity back, the 'me without you' back. We've all felt it, this heartbreak, and putting it into words does seem to help sometimes.