Monday, February 9, 2009

There You Are Comments

Rating: 5.0

Everywhere I turn,
There you are.
There for me to see,
There for me to remember.
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Paul Price
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Sonny Rainshine 09 February 2009

Though a comment about your poetry won't do much to ease the hurt, I think your poem very effectively expresses your strong feelings. I really like the last stanza in which you want your identity back, the 'me without you' back. We've all felt it, this heartbreak, and putting it into words does seem to help sometimes.

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