Monday, September 18, 2006

Theres A Shark With Out Teath, And I Think It Wonts Some Tea Comments

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BIG dreams, fall into the void,
your river, drowns hope, you
stand, and kick, and kick, then
back away, and yell,
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DAVID GERARDINO
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 18 September 2006

ONCE UPON A POET, I WAS A dREAM IN TIME....WELL DONE, DAVID''''''''''''FJR

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Ruby Root 18 September 2006

Hi David, Very different, Some dreams do fall into a void. Great metaphors used. Take care. Excellent poem.

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