These Arms Poem by lost lindsey

These Arms

Rating: 3.5


These limbs I have
These arms I call mine
holding myself in my pain and agony

These tan arms stretch outward
looking for something more
than the excuse of scars

Nothing is on them but freckles
from a warm sun, a fanciful thought
of it has been cast down.

Having held a beautiful girl
promising safety on a hopeless breath
to breathe in fresh air is a scarce thing.

Living in a cold place
with a pallid face
and limpid lies

I feel the sting of regret
and hear the song of hate
praising my name

Sunday, October 6, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: hopeless
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 18 November 2013

I've read your poem but couldn't understand what you wanted to convey by these lines: 'Having held a beautiful girl promising safety on a hopeless breath to breathe in fresh air is a scarce thing.' And.. 'I feel the sting of regret and hear the song of hate praising my name' Why do you hear the song of hate praise your name? I would appreciate if you could kindly throw some light.

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