These Vase Rolled Back Poem by Prasetya Utama

These Vase Rolled Back



The Vases were rolled back
my wife wake up
grumbled
“Who rolled back these flower vases?
I’m sure, those wild cats did it! ”

I revise these pot lies
To the ordinary places
From roled back on the gutter

To day there is no cat like to eat
The gutter mouse
Scent their meat
Were not delicious anymore

Those cat prefer like
To steal salted fish
Mommy
Who has much vase?
Or roast which had spices
Nice, yes their smell sting
But mommy still watch
Her roast beef
With cudgel
Broom
Ready to beat
those wild cat
draw near hers

those cat were angry
after Ministerial meeting
rolled back
whole flower pot
in the palace
together, rally
with the gutter mouse
rolled back not only pot
also the whole flower pot
around the city

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetry Hound 29 August 2006

You have some very intriguing poems. However, it is clear that you are not fluent in English. Perhaps you should find an editor who can help you clean up your English usage problems. Regards.

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