They Only Know Each Other In The Dark Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

They Only Know Each Other In The Dark

Rating: 3.5


WE only know each other
in the dark, still the
clock tics, testing, one,
two, three, four.
WE stain the ground with
our blood, testing, one, two,
three, four.
WE exhale our goodbys, testing,
one, two, three, four.
WE shake hands, and fly out
the door, still the clock
ticks, and ticks, for more.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
***** ********* 20 February 2006

This poem has fluidity and great imagery, the pace is racey as is the subject. Such as life, we just have to remember to live in the now and slow down enough not to miss each other before it is all done and dusted. 10 from Tai

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David Gerardino 20 February 2006

FOR A GOOD FRIEND............CHEATING ON

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