Things Change Poem by ashley perez

Things Change

Rating: 3.5


I WISH THINGS WERE THE SAME
I CANT EVER FORGET THE PAST
BECAUSE ITS SOMTHING WE ONCE HAD
I FEEL REPLACED LONELY BETRAYED AND LOST
I JUST DONT KNOW WHAT TO DO WITH MY SELF
YOU HURT ME AND EVERYDAY BY DAY I HURT EVEN MORE WHEN I SEE IT AND TO THAT IT IS TRUE
YOU BARELY MET THAT PERSON AND
WHAT YOU KNOWN ME OVER A YEAR AND YOU CHOISE HER OVER ME
NOW I DONT KNOW WHO TO TRUST ANYMORE
ALL I KNOW IS I CANT LOOK AT YOU THE SAME WAY

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yaseen Anwer 19 December 2008

nicely pened Good work!

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Greenwolfe 1962 15 November 2008

A short letter. Nicely written. Not very unique. Perhaps, needing a special illustration. GW62

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