Monday, July 7, 2014

Thirty Minutes Together Comments

Rating: 5.0

When destiny threw them together
for thirty minutes

they heard each other's heartbeats
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Valsa George 09 July 2014

In thirty minutes time, a beautiful relationship developed and withered! Still it was worth it 'he preened her feather she spread her bare'......... enjoyed these lines more!

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Lorraine Colon 07 July 2014

Perhaps 30 minutes is better than nothing. Well written.

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