Wednesday, March 16, 2005

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Cesar Herrera
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worstest? i know it was most likely deliberate, but i don't think it works. besides, what is the idea you are trying to convey? i'm not being told anything here. you are obviously influenced by hip-hop, which is fine. but even (true) hip-hop heads dropp knowledge in every rhyme they write. keep at it, you just might get there. Jake

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