Gordon David

Rookie - 3 Points (1st September 1959 / Edinburgh)

This End - Poem by Gordon David

This is me this is who and what I am
This is me throwing my toys out of the pram
This is me trying so very hard to be better
This is me shaking as I type in this letter
This is me some day I should give up trying
This is me no more tears and no more crying
This is me not cool, or going with the flow
This is me what we've lost I'll never know
This is me the one who let you slip away
This is me should I go, or could I stay?
This is me not knowing what to do next
This is me staying connected just by text
This is me sitting waiting for you to call
This is ME life has no meaning after all
This is me waving goodbye to my best friend
This is me wondering when this pain will end

Comments about This End by Gordon David

  • (10/23/2013 5:20:00 PM)

    If this poem is about you, I know how you feel. Great poem! (Report) Reply

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  • (2/5/2010 1:27:00 AM)

    Your use repetition is very effective and emphasizes that the darkness that runs through the poem is being felt by you. I love the mood and darkness that is expressed throughout.
    A well written rhyme, well done! !
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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 5, 2010

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 10, 2012

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