This Obvious Pain Poem by Chidori Storm

This Obvious Pain



There is a pain
That I feel
Deep inside
My body and mind.

Only I know
About this pain
That's even worse
Than the rain.

I have tried
To tell the ones
That I love
About this pain I feel.

They say they listen
They say they care
But I know the truth
And it's not fair.

I need someone
To hear me now
To hear me shout
I WANT OUT!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
A H 24 March 2010

Very true it really seems sometimes that there is no one there. That is why poetry is so amazing, you can spill your emotions onto a page which helps you make sense of what your feeling

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Kayla B Mitchell 24 March 2010

i know how that feels nice poem

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