Chidori Storm

Rookie - 63 Points (5/14/1993 / Hell)

A Monster - Poem by Chidori Storm

For one reason or another
I have considered myself
A monster among others
For that is what I become when I lose control.

When I lose control I become
Someone entirely different
Someone who has no heart, feelings or soul
Someone who is made of anger and hatred.

When this monster gets loose
He finds the closest thing to him
And he will try everything he can
To unleash his anger and hate.

He will not care at all
If he hurts or endangers
Himself or others in the process
As long as He gets what He wants.

He is the reason I can't get angry
Because He is too dangerous to let out,
He is also the reason
I am so weak after fighting to keep him in.

Topic(s) of this poem: anger, pain


Comments about A Monster by Chidori Storm

  • ~Deana ~ Dotterweich (2/8/2012 10:57:00 AM)


    I have major anger problems too. Well written and I can relate to the peice :) (Report) Reply

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  • Crazy Vampire (3/26/2010 1:09:00 PM)


    ya i have already had the pleasure of meeting this side of u...or should i say a part of it... great poem =] (Report) Reply

  • (3/26/2010 12:36:00 PM)


    I guess people don't get you angry. Good poem, I can easly relate. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, March 3, 2010

Poem Edited: Friday, April 14, 2017


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