Sunday, July 6, 2008

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Won't you please love me so I can love myself?
Won't you please need me like I need someone else?
I felt your love come and go
Like the puddles of water left after the snow
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Dan Ochs
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Anong All 06 July 2008

I lik'd the reading of this poem. The repeats work too, giving to it a feeling of a song. Thanks for sharing!

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Dan Ochs

Dan Ochs

Boulder, CO
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Dan Ochs
Boulder, CO
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