This Smile (Version #2) Poem by Heaven Ludy

This Smile (Version #2)

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This smile hides the pain I bare
The hurt I feel
The tears I cry
This smile hides my broken heart
Yet still unmend
And torn apart
This smile hides the fears in me
The pain that no
One else can see
But yet this smile I loathe to wear
Has decieved me
Now my pain
Everyone else can see

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tsira Goge 07 June 2008

Fine work, excellent pride... Best wishes, Tsira

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Greenwolfe 1962 07 June 2008

If this poem were cleaned up and altered a little it might be special. GW62

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