Renee Marie

Freshman - 919 Points (Danbury, CT USA)

This Twin Bed Feels So Huge - Poem by Renee Marie

Hello hallow night
right here
in the middle
of my heavy heart
darkening hope
that the lonely seconds will dance swiftly
toward a bright tomorrow
when wild abandon winds us back
to the beginning
of hello
and our eyes water-up
with deepening affectionate laughter.

Topic(s) of this poem: missing you

Form: Free Verse


Poet's Notes about The Poem

I was missing the feeling of waking up with my lover at the time. In that space, all I had was a twin bed and we took great, long, sensual pleasure nesting in it like stacked cups in the cupboard.

Comments about This Twin Bed Feels So Huge by Renee Marie

  • Adeline FosterAdeline Foster (9/1/2012 12:28:00 PM)

    This is a lovely emotional poem. Read mine – Hand Haying –
    Adeline
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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 16, 2004

Poem Edited: Sunday, September 27, 2015


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