saathi 4you


Thought In Response To Ur Thoughts - Poem by saathi 4you

look the sea shore with so much 'shore'in its waves
waves com to the shore with a layer of hope
a hope to c a freind who just c its beauty
a hope to c a freind who just c its love
a hope to c a freind who just c its submissiveness to all coulour of bodies
a hope to c a freind who just c its approach to all feets

no one can be found by waves
it returns in a deep heart of sea
but with a great hope in its eys.
with a innocent wish in its mind
with a simlicity in its approach
it return back to sea shore again and again and again..............

no rest in efforts
no best in deserts
keep searching for the best
till last breath in the chest
its a call of nature my dear guest.

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Comments about Thought In Response To Ur Thoughts by saathi 4you

  • (4/12/2008 2:54:00 AM)


    hi,
    there is great theme in ur poem it also conveys a message try try until u succeed so keep up the gud work...........
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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 11, 2008



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