Thoughts Of A Loner Poem by Ari Lynn

Thoughts Of A Loner

Rating: 5.0


Lonely I am,
As a teenage girl,
To face the judgements,
Of this unkind world.
In my bed I lay,
As a I dream day by day,
Why can't I,
Wish myself away.?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 20 April 2012

A dream is a dream by any given name and it cannot be purposely controlled by anyone! Once you go to sleep with Hope and Faith intact, there is the great chance that one will wake up the next day with a big and bright smile on his or her face! Dear Ari, when you feel lonely is not the same as being alone and pretty sure you are not alone at all for the Might One above is looking out for you at all time! Beautiful and well crafted write that is clearly and outburst of your heart and shows your precious feelings and talent! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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