Thoughts On A Bowl Poem by Annabelle James

Thoughts On A Bowl

Rating: 3.3


A black hollow bowl,
The bowl...
Is my heart
I am a pioneer of pain
Nobody understands, nobody can see.
The pain that is, being me
The dogs no longer acknowledge me
With their solidarity bark
Because they know that I
Am dead inside
Within the hollow chambers of my tortured being
There lies no more a beating heart
Instead a lonely pack of 6AA batteries
That beat this fountain of wasted tears through my wasted body

Friday, May 5, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: dogs
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sonny Rainshine 05 May 2006

Hey, anyone who can write wonderful images such as 'the pioneer' of pain can't be 'dead.' You're a poet. Now get busy and write another.

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Mandira Mitra 05 May 2006

Cheer up. thing will be fine.

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