Sunday, September 16, 2007

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Rating: 5.0

There's a girl on my bed,
another on my mind,
and to make things worse there's one on the phone
telling me that she's decided she doesn't want to be alone.
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Aaron Myers
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 16 September 2007

Hey, but think of it this way, Aaron...if this were Baseball...you'd be batting.333, and more than likely be considered an All-Star! lol! ...But this poem, as far as literary value goes, works a wee bit differently in the evaluation process...Yoiu see, a 10, is all PH will allow me to grace you with...and so i will...Very inventive work, Aaron. ~ FjR ~

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Ronald Stroman 16 September 2007

nicely written....................... i enjoyed. take care.

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