Sabari Vas

Rookie (10/2/1993 / Trivandrum)

Through The Way - Poem by Sabari Vas

I remember,
two years before
I started my voyage
on a river by a boat

It was my happiest
ever moment in life
I enjoyed it a lot
It was full of excitement

It was now a past memory
because the river now ended
into a large sea
I now confused where to row my boat

But there are many payment ships
to reach the final destiny
But i am royal
I will not take it

I have decided now,
I will jump into the sea
and reach my destiny through
pain and hard work.


Comments about Through The Way by Sabari Vas

  • (5/3/2011 2:54:00 AM)


    Through my +1, +2 classes (Report) Reply

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  • (5/3/2011 2:49:00 AM)


    Nice poem with plenty of depth. Beautifully conceived. Good vivid imagery.
    Great stuff.
    A perfect...10
    Thanks for sharing.....
    Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 3, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 4, 2011


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