Thunder Storm Poem by auty paul jason

Thunder Storm

Rating: 5.0


Date,10.3.2010
Thunder storm hit on east coast
One thousand and five hundred people died
Water level rise
Up to ' Water over bridge'.
Sixteen year later
The town die.

Wednesday, March 10, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: water
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sheldon Saluta 14 March 2010

you are great! even if the poem is lighter in words and distress but it sounds perfect! you have such a talent! keep the pen writing!

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