Tidy Poet Poem by Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide

Tidy Poet



As I dead-headed poppies just after dawn,
I was surprised
to be already accompanied by bees.
I put it down to the warmth of the morning
and bee-prediction of wind and rain.

I thought they'd be finished their harvest by nine.

The new flowers weren't open fully yet;
the bees were slightly impeded:
perhaps the pollen will last until ten.

'Whichever number,
an earlier than usual time, '
I crafted,
to tidy this poem with a rhyme.

P.S.8a.m. report:
a less furry, more wary, shiny-winged, puce-eyed bee,
an altogether sleeker bee,
in camera caught.

Tidy Poet
Sunday, October 7, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: flowers,identification,insects,rhyme
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
P.P.S. that sleeker bee is a hover fly (see pic)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wes Vogler 08 October 2018

One more experience I have not had dead-heading poppies just after dawn. I once gathered silvery smelt at dawn off Spanish Banks in Vancouver (1939) hi Doug

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Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide
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