Friday, March 27, 2015

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Wow! ! what an incredible phenomenon
Its miracles many have i seen
how it heals and seals
everything is invested
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santhosh kana
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Daniel Brick 09 April 2015

This poem got under my skin! It's very persuasive although I'm not sure I know what it taught me. The vividness of the language carried me along. Your images are fresh and, as Mayakovsky said, they have no wrinkles! I like the fact that you didn't just moan about time and condemn its ravages but sincerely tried tried to fit it into the life we lead. And since we can't escape it, that is a wise alternative.

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