Friday, August 31, 2012

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A windstorm dropped a bird from the sky
It fell to the ground
Its dreams broke and died
But as time passed by
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Garrett Richardson
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Daniel Tait 31 August 2012

Yuh ur teh worzt at tis poum riting stuf. Juz Suhying.

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Daniel Tait 31 August 2012

Your like a rabbit in a hat, cat on a mat, a turtle mating with a rat. #TAITKNOWSRHYMES

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Bianca Harkild 31 August 2012

This is such a good poem. Well set out and well written. Glad to see another young student who is interested in poetry.

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