Time And Feeling Poem by James Atil

Time And Feeling



I'm writing this poem
while you're reading this...

I'm standing right now outside our house
while gazing the stars and feel the words you've said
reflecting the past days and occasions
pondering our love story and submitting it
to the womb of history
the clock said tick tack and my heart said I love you
what a great feeling to have thoughts of you honey!
the deep-night allows to crawl my mind into the center our lives
the sentiments that wrapped my body is intense
as the cricket shouting in the dark side
I hope you will gaze the same stars
feel the same words and ponder our lives with the same
cricket shouting in the dark side!
Now, as the streams of my emotions continue flowing from my being like the wind passes by, coming from one direction
I can't help to commemorate the loveliest moments of our journey
those romantic melodies that we've shared,
those disco nights that we've enjoyed; and
those devout nights that we're on bended knees
As the time goes its way as my heart beats increasingly
the feeling to have you for eternity is sculpted in my being!
So, while reading this piece hope you will keep the faith alive
coz feeling is re-experienced through time.

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James Atil

James Atil

Cebu, Philippines
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