Thursday, August 25, 2011

Time Decides Comments

Rating: 5.0

an acorn contains the universe,
a moth contains the night.
the flicker and flame
of small twigs burning
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Eric Cockrell
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Patti Masterman 25 August 2011

Omg this is a beauty. I was reading and came to the part 'beneath the snows of winter' thought, that's a great ending- then read the next lines and thought: THAT'S a great ending! Good poetry, friend, good poetry is what we've got right here.

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