Thursday, October 15, 2020

Time For Us To Meet Comments

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In the faint light of the dawn
I come out to watch the buds
To open up and play in the sun
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Deluke Muwanigwa 15 October 2020

I come out to watch the buds In the faint light of the dawn They open up and play in the sun Swopping line 1 and 2 and have " They" beginning of line 3 makes your great love poem greater. I think

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Varsha M 15 October 2020

Beautiful expression. Nicely written sir.

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