Wednesday, July 8, 2020

Time Is... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Time is disease ridden.
Its nerves are frayed,
And its veins stick out.
It's old blood and bones limp along
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Shaun Cronick 10 July 2020

Nicely written and beautifully presented an if memory serves me well and have to ask you did your Time's Nerves Are Frayed springboard and become a catalyst for this poem. If so, I too see triggers and inroads to other poems from a word, line, title and a phrase on what a writer has just been written and then rereads in quite and focused solitude. 10++ and thank you Dominic for sharing. Take care good sir and stay Blessed.

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