Saturday, April 22, 2006

Time Is A Box Of Light Comments

Rating: 4.0

Time is a light box,
a basket of rain,
limbs from a star sprung,
the blood's spiral of forms again.
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Simon Gwynn
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Sonny Rainshine 22 April 2006

Beautifully and skilfully written. Excellent lines and inventive word choice and effective rhyme scheme. 'A basket of rain' is a great analogy-could even make a good title for a poem, with the idea of a basket not holding water very well. Bravo, Simon.

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