Beautifully and skilfully written. Excellent lines and inventive word choice and effective rhyme scheme. 'A basket of rain' is a great analogy-could even make a good title for a poem, with the idea of a basket not holding water very well. Bravo, Simon.
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Beautifully and skilfully written. Excellent lines and inventive word choice and effective rhyme scheme. 'A basket of rain' is a great analogy-could even make a good title for a poem, with the idea of a basket not holding water very well. Bravo, Simon.