Time Journals: 1 Poem by elysabeth faslund

Time Journals: 1

Rating: 5.0


Cold little driplets...
Minnows darting, finning
Quick, turn, quick-
Tickle, hop, shallow-
Stomp squishy sand
Between toes.

Tip-top waves breaking on
Knees, shoving back
To when Daddy hooked
His finger into your
Waistband and said,
'Whoa, little minnow.
Too deep, little girl.
Wait a few years.'

Then he'd dive out of
Sight...a hand shoving,
Throwing you high out
The water.

Giggling, squealing, splash!
And Daddy made sure
You always floated...to see
The sky.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Howard 25 May 2008

Tender, beautiful and filled with love - every word and image in perfect sequence.

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elysabeth faslund

elysabeth faslund

Thibodaux. Louisiana
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