Mohammad Ilyas

Rookie - 0 Points (17th April,1970. / Chitral, Pakistan)

Titanic (1912) - Poem by Mohammad Ilyas

The big talk does not remove the wield
but manliness is to remain firm in the field
many though claim to be heroes and knights
that speaks out is the sword and the shield

All enjoyment is attached to a healthy life
its threat is sufficient to loose temper
those who are not honoured of their calmness
only hard times give opportunity to remember

put all the pride aside getting on a ride
pray to God to make journey safe and quiet
to measure the cause making one to travel
as to face the nature is a struggle a fight.


Comments about Titanic (1912) by Mohammad Ilyas

  • (5/10/2006 8:38:00 AM)


    This is a really good poem...my favourite line is 'but manliness is to remain firm in the field' -

    Keep up the good work!
    Dona
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  • (5/9/2006 6:37:00 AM)


    well written. i like the line 'The big talk does not remove the wield '
    superb writing
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  • (5/9/2006 5:12:00 AM)


    Intriguing poem...i liked this alot...well done! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 9, 2006



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