Monday, June 27, 2011

To A Dear Friend, Comments

Rating: 5.0

What makes the sun beam bright, the sunlight shine-your smile
what makes the roses bloom, the roses redden as if blushing-your beauty
what makes the tree's leaves dance, dancing in the wind-they do when you pass by
what makes the birds sing-they stop quietly and sing to your melodious laugh
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 27 June 2011

Great poem. Wonderfully conceived. I liked it for its remarkable imagery and decent style. Rated it 10. TFS..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1.

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