-to A Past Lover.. A Wish To Make You Happy. Comments

wow...this is a different person than ive know b4..i meant by your writting. its not the same as the old times, and thats a good thing..i think. n.e ways, great poem there, it was really sweet, ur ex should really read this, itll probably make her feel hopefull and know that you still care for her, even if u guys had spilt up. good job, i think you're getting very good at this whole poem thingy. love the rhyme scheme in that poem. yea...thats all i gotta say umm.. peace..

Nice One. I liked the lines 'dont be scared to love, risk it all or dont risk at all.'

Awe...that's sweet. I love this poem! It's a fantastic write! Keep them coming! I love reading them! Peace out, Lexi Baby.