Monday, January 11, 2016

To Be A Cloud Comments

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If I were a cloud, I could look down and see
The valleys, the hills, oceans and seas.

My existence would diminish,
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Paul Gomez
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Howard Savage 13 January 2016

To be a cloud is a good poem, but clouds have many characteristics such as storms, lighting, and whirlwinds. Think about it. clouds can spell danger. Great metaphor.

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