Friday, February 26, 2016

To Be Like A Butterfly Comments

Rating: 5.0

Everybody is envious
Of the colourful butterfly
His delicate wings
And graceful flight
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Jibrael Jos
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T Rajan Evol 27 February 2016

Wonderful poem, it has imagery, story and the imagination, thanks for sharing.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 26 February 2016

Even most difficult mountains and hills look very beautiful from far away and one realizes their steepness and other formidable features when one goes near them. Similarly butterflies too have to face keen struggle for existence though one may take them as carefree and happiest species. Beautifully conceived thought provoking poem. Thanks for sharing.10 + points.

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