Sunday, February 7, 2016

To Love A Snake Comments

Rating: 5.0

The snake has lost his luster,
As his venom now I see,
Though his movements remain graceful
They intrigue even me
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Annie Velasquez
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Sekharan Pookkat 14 May 2016

serpent is the symbol of the forbidden fruit. please turn away from these attacks or try to resist if you do not prefer- thanks for sharing such a beautiful craft

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Roseann Shawiak 07 February 2016

Great analogy, using the snake as a sign of betrayal is very apropos. Your poem flowed and slithered gracefully through my mind as I read it, very well written. Loyalty is a tribute to the person you are within.10+++++++++++ Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Annie Velasquez 03 May 2016

exactly what I was going for. Thank you so much for your foresight.

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